"Close encounters of the far kind"

Part 1

by Lord Thanatos

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2 June 19, 2009 - 10:46 PM Lady Rohun from Netherlands   Ow yeah, almost forgot to mention... I really like the part when the reader is able to peek in on monitor in chapter 2, a real nice touch! 1 June 19, 2009 - 04:24 PM Lady Rohun from Netherlands   Action! Dead bodies! BBQ! I’m liking this episode to the max haha But I’m having a hard time deciding who’s the odd fellow…Serrag or Selurtis. I do how ever like that I’m getting to know the characters even better in this episode due more dialogs of personal nature. And LOL…90cm aliens?! If they weren’t as mean as angry leprechauns, I would pity them getting kicked around haha But for now I quote Mullins: “Give those aliens the proverbial finger!” Onwards to the next episode, engage! P.S. Just one note…all the characters start their dialog with their surname, but in scene 4 Harwood is written with “Ray” his first name at the beginning of his dialog. Page #1 of 1